Things I would change about "Fury".
Kes would have come to Tuvok's birthday party.
Kes would not have rammed the ship.
A scene with Kes getting to meet Seven and Seven expressing a wish that Kes had stayed with the ship (that's called an apology, folks. look it up).
This episode not to have been made. That's not fair. This episode not to have had this plot or this title. Kes being in it is fine.
Doc/Kes interaction.
More Neelix/Kes interaction.
Kes happy.
Janeway/Chakotay shipper candy.
More than 56 days from the beginning - the Vidiians? Really? Knowing about their history? Already? I don't buy it. Change that.
Why would Tuvok see Naomi or any of the Borg, who Kes would not even know about? Why is there no continuity? And why is Kes so damn angry? She was always more levelheaded than she had a right to be, so why would she blame Voyager for her own choices? WHY? Change that.
Kes was also never violent, and always respected Janeway. An attack on Janeway would be OOC, right? Wrong according to Act 4. Change that.
Yeah, you know what else is just wrong? Janeway killing Kes.. Change that.
Thing A - Kes boards Voyager and goes back in time. Thing B - OldKes dies. Janeway tells YoungKes that ThingA will happen because she learned to use her abilities. Outcome: Kes stops learning to use her abilities. Therefore Kes never leaves. So why do we get to Thing C - YoungKes makes a moving holomessage for OldKes? And how did they project it in Engineering? Change it.
So OldKes should remember that there's a recording waiting for her, right? Change that.
And as a side note, since when would Janeway forget Kes was coming? Change that.
Most insulting line ever: "You made the decision to leave Voyager." How did you not choke on it, Jennifer? Change that.
"Three years ago you travelled back in time." I count 5 and a half. Change that.
Why can't she stay? Why the hell can't she stay? I doubt Jennifer Lien would have turned down the work, and she certainly would have made a splash as AngstyKes. Too bad for me, it didn't happen. And for Jennifer.
How would Kes have forgotten? She's not dumb. At some point when concocting that plan and remembering every freaking detail about her life 6 years ago (or 3 years if you listen to Scientist Who Cannot Count Kathryn Janeway) she might have remembered making a hologram to talk herself down if she went apeshit and tried to suck the warp core while planning to go apeshit and suck the warpcore, ya think?
They freaking send her home. After all the drama getting her off Ocampa, we send her freaking home.
Remember "The Gift"? Remember how she sent them 10 years closer to home? So she can get back to Ocampa... think, after blowing up Deck 11, she might be able to shave some more time off the journey?
All in all, I think I liked the goodbye from "The Gift" better.
Although I always wished Neelix could have said goodbye to her.
Now he has.
Kes would have come to Tuvok's birthday party.
Kes would not have rammed the ship.
A scene with Kes getting to meet Seven and Seven expressing a wish that Kes had stayed with the ship (that's called an apology, folks. look it up).
This episode not to have been made. That's not fair. This episode not to have had this plot or this title. Kes being in it is fine.
Doc/Kes interaction.
More Neelix/Kes interaction.
Kes happy.
Janeway/Chakotay shipper candy.
More than 56 days from the beginning - the Vidiians? Really? Knowing about their history? Already? I don't buy it. Change that.
Why would Tuvok see Naomi or any of the Borg, who Kes would not even know about? Why is there no continuity? And why is Kes so damn angry? She was always more levelheaded than she had a right to be, so why would she blame Voyager for her own choices? WHY? Change that.
Kes was also never violent, and always respected Janeway. An attack on Janeway would be OOC, right? Wrong according to Act 4. Change that.
Yeah, you know what else is just wrong? Janeway killing Kes.. Change that.
Thing A - Kes boards Voyager and goes back in time. Thing B - OldKes dies. Janeway tells YoungKes that ThingA will happen because she learned to use her abilities. Outcome: Kes stops learning to use her abilities. Therefore Kes never leaves. So why do we get to Thing C - YoungKes makes a moving holomessage for OldKes? And how did they project it in Engineering? Change it.
So OldKes should remember that there's a recording waiting for her, right? Change that.
And as a side note, since when would Janeway forget Kes was coming? Change that.
Most insulting line ever: "You made the decision to leave Voyager." How did you not choke on it, Jennifer? Change that.
"Three years ago you travelled back in time." I count 5 and a half. Change that.
Why can't she stay? Why the hell can't she stay? I doubt Jennifer Lien would have turned down the work, and she certainly would have made a splash as AngstyKes. Too bad for me, it didn't happen. And for Jennifer.
How would Kes have forgotten? She's not dumb. At some point when concocting that plan and remembering every freaking detail about her life 6 years ago (or 3 years if you listen to Scientist Who Cannot Count Kathryn Janeway) she might have remembered making a hologram to talk herself down if she went apeshit and tried to suck the warp core while planning to go apeshit and suck the warpcore, ya think?
They freaking send her home. After all the drama getting her off Ocampa, we send her freaking home.
Remember "The Gift"? Remember how she sent them 10 years closer to home? So she can get back to Ocampa... think, after blowing up Deck 11, she might be able to shave some more time off the journey?
All in all, I think I liked the goodbye from "The Gift" better.
Although I always wished Neelix could have said goodbye to her.
Now he has.
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